Thursday, January 7, 2016

Narrative 2

NJ Battleship

One Saturday afternoon, after a long drive,  me and my family went to a battleship.  It was called the USS New Jersey.  We got tickets, and we went outside.  We saw the battleship, “Whoa!  That’s big!”  I said in a loud voice.  My family walked onto the battleship.  A guy told us to follow the red line, then, follow the yellow line.
When we got to the yellow line, we saw rooms, canyons and fake crewmates.  I saw the captain’s chair and I saw the steering wheel!  I was amazed like hundreds of people.  We got lost, then, we went up a staircase to a door.  “We found our way out!” I said in a nice voice, “Where are we?”
Afterward, we saw a helicopter!  It was a big helicopter.  “Look at that helicopter!”  I said in a loud voice.  Then we took a picture with the helicopter!  After that we had to leave.  We went to the car and went home.  I hope me and my family get to come back and see something else soon!

Thursday, October 29, 2015

Narrative 1

Dylan                                         #1

The Party on Sunday

On Sunday, I had a party at my house. Nick, Chris and Michael came over.  We went into my basement to play restaurant with my brother and sister’s cook set.  I was the bad guy with a Nerf gun, and I shot Christopher.  BOOM!  He was down, THUMP!  He got up.  I pretended to  sipped a paper smoothie and a hamburger.  I didn’t like the paper smoothie I threw it, BANG!  I enjoyed the hamburger.  Afterwards, I ran like a cheetah.  My legs were hurting BUM-BUM-BUM-BUM I thought they were going to pop out.  I want that day to come again.  I want them to come again. I was so happy I was smiling.  

Thursday, October 8, 2015

All About Me


Dylan is 8 years old and he lives in Caldwell with his parents, brother and sister. Dylan enjoys playing boats with his brother and sister. He also likes building with Legos without directions.  He sometimes gets writing inspiration from life experiences.